I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
At camp, we have a lot of fun because we went to the monorail and zipline and all the different games. So now we back and I miss camp so much because camp is like make me happy all-day.
Konnichiwa Robert, How are Today? Good blog post But it could be better. Maybe if you gave people a better explanation it would make people want to read it more. and explaining what more we did at camp. because you only put two things and you might want to explain what's happening in the picture (You should add more photos and explain what happing in them) anyways that's all bye!
Chom Reap Sour Robert, I heard that the year Sixes had a lot of fun in Camp, I wish I was there. My big sister Stephanie used to be in this school last year she also did camp and the picture of you looks a lot of fun! At camp, what did you ate at the start of the day?
Konnichiwa Robert, How are Today? Good blog post But it could be better. Maybe if you gave people a better explanation it would make people want to read it more. and explaining what more we did at camp. because you only put two things and you might want to explain what's happening in the picture (You should add more photos and explain what happing in them) anyways that's all bye!
ReplyDeleteChom Reap Sour Robert, I heard that the year Sixes had a lot of fun in Camp, I wish I was there. My big sister Stephanie used to be in this school last year she also did camp and the picture of you looks a lot of fun! At camp, what did you ate at the start of the day?
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