I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Bula Vinaka Robert it Jason I like the color of the background and all the color and maybe make your writing bigger because it hard to see and an easier font.
kia ora robert its brodie.i like the colours of the background. i like the font you written in. next time you could add full stops at the end of a scenes.
Bula Robert Addison here maybe next time you could change the colour of the text on your google drawing so people can see what you wrote or you could change the background colour but otherwise you did awesome.
Kia ora robert it's Nikau.Nice job on the slide i really like the colours.Next time try to make the background not that attractive because they would look more at the background then your work and try to put more description on the blog.great job
hey Robert its Benaiah here i liked the font you used you brought me back to when we did this in class next time you could tell about what you did good bye see you soon
Bula Vinaka Robert it Jason I like the color of the background and all the color and maybe make your writing bigger because it hard to see and an easier font.
ReplyDeletekia ora robert its brodie.i like the colours of the background.
ReplyDeletei like the font you written in.
next time you could add full stops at the end of a scenes.
Bula robert this is very good you did good writing and cool background and i hope you had fun doing it very good.
ReplyDeletehey Robert it's Simeli.good job on your blog post I like the colors that you edit that looks cool!!!
ReplyDeleteBula Robert Addison here maybe next time you could change the colour of the text on your google drawing so people can see what you wrote or you could change the background colour but otherwise you did awesome.
ReplyDeleteKia ora robert it's Nikau.Nice job on the slide i really like the colours.Next time try to make the background not that attractive because they would look more at the background then your work and try to put more description on the blog.great job
ReplyDeletehey Robert its Benaiah here
ReplyDeletei liked the font you used
you brought me back to when we did this in class
next time you could tell about what you did
good bye see you soon